This week we have been learning to edit. In class we watched a video of somone who got told draw a scientific drawing of a butterfly. He did it. He drew. It was good but it wasn't how he wanted it to be. His friends told him that it looked like a butterfly, but not the same as that so he kept on trying 6 times and finally got it. This is my first draft of a post... 
I had got feedback from my friends and they said it was a good start. Then they said that I could add some colour and show some evidence that I did it so here's my final post... 
I had got feedback from my friends and they said it was a good start. Then they said that I could add some colour and show some evidence that I did it so here's my final post... 
Awesome Aroha! I like the way you have explained how the Austin's Butterfly video helped you with your learning.
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