Aroha your story is so cool/good!!!! My favourite sentience was ... music was coming from all directions swallowing my ears foolishly running back and forth I accidentally nocked over a little kid.
Maybe next time you could improve on describing the dance more instead of saying Finished.
Aroha your story is so cool/good!!!! My favourite sentience was ... music was coming from all directions swallowing my ears foolishly running back and forth I accidentally nocked over a little kid.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could improve on describing the dance more instead of saying Finished.
Georgia :)