Wow Aroha! You are working really well towards meeting the success criteria! Your first paragraph is excellent because you have used language features well for impact. Carefully re read your middle paragraphs to ensure they make sense, also try to use short sentences in some place to create suspense.
Wow Aroha! You are working really well towards meeting the success criteria! Your first paragraph is excellent because you have used language features well for impact. Carefully re read your middle paragraphs to ensure they make sense, also try to use short sentences in some place to create suspense.
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